请大家帮我看看英语作文有什么语法错误，谢~

2025-04-09 06:07:34

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回答1：

< What you should do when firing?>
When firing,you must be calm.First of all,you should touch the door of your room.If it's very heated,you must not open it.Next,you had better put some wet towels on the ueface of door and make sure there no room for the somke to rush in.Then,you have to wait.When you hearing the fire alarm(go off?!),please open the window and shout oudly.Fireman will find you and save you.
That's all you should do when there is a fire.
这是我给你改的，是我觉得比较好的表达，你可以斟酌使用。站在给别人建议的角度写的。

回答2：

要分段吧，还有是remember not to open it 吧！when you hear，为什么要加ing?the fire alarm ring（响）吧？最后一段是firemen用复数！结尾用that are....吧？

回答3：

when you hearing 改成hear 。。。arlarm going off .firemen 最后that is 改成 these are.

回答4：

< What should we do when there is a fire?>
When there is a fire,we must be calm.First,go to the door of our rooms,touch the surface of the door.If it's very hot ,remember to open it.Next,wet some towels and put them along the bottom of the door and wait.when you hearing the fire alarm(go off?!),please open the window and shout.Fireman will find you and take you away.

回答5：

When there is a fire,we must be calm.First,go to the door of our rooms,touch the surface of the door.If it's very hot ,remember to open it.Next,wet some towels and put them along the bottom of the door and wait.when you hearing the fire alarm(go off?!),please open the window and shout.Fireman will find you and take you away.
That's all we should do when there is a fire.