求英语句子改错

您好！

我的修改如下:
1. Our body will be healthy by this activity.

2.All the people want to live in a healthy lifestyle both woman and man.

either or
固定词组
只能二选一的

3. In the other hand, we extremely need for the enough rest.

in the other hand:在另一只手中

on the other hand:另一方面（两个方面中的另一面，特指）
on another hand:另一方面（很多方面中的一方面，泛指）
而且need后不加for，所以去掉

所以改为“on another hand，we extremely need the enough rest”
4. Intelligent mind is from the active body.
Intelligent mind 智慧的头脑
5. We can release tension when we are sleeping.

6. At there, I have been thought about “How To Lead a Healthy Lifestyle”.
7. Secondly, we should do exercise regularly.

8. Balanced diet is good for our digestive system run smoothly.

9. Thirdly, everyone needs enough rest after throughout thier whole day.
10. We should jog or had a brisk walking at the park.
11. Water is also good for our health as it is important to our intestine.
12. Eating with the following the piramid food that we can find it anywhere like at the school canteen.
13. So, we’ll got healthy when the waste thing out of our body.
out of一般是指从具体物体里取出、拿出、走出、发出等等。
而out from则是来自或发自抽象物体里。
例如：
out from death
out from confrontation
out from deep
out from under
等等.....
所以用out of

14. There are also many campaigns organized by the goverment to ensure that people still healthy.

ensure保证;担保that][+v-ing] 所以你要改为“to ensure that people still healthy”

15. We can’t eat the unbalanced foods like chocolates, junk food, ice-cream and many more as they can make our health in danger.

您好，有的我在原题上修改了，看起来不明显，请见谅。

1. We will be healthy by doing this activity.
2.All the people want to live a healthy lifestyle.
3.On the other hand, we extremely need enough rest.
4. Mind intelligence from the active body.
5.We can release tension when we go to sleep.
6.I have been thinking about “How To Lead A Healthy Lifestyle”there.
7.Secondly, we should have exercise regularly.
8.Balanced diet is good for our digestive systems to make it run smoothly.
9.Third, everyone needs enough rest after the whole day.
10.We should jog or have a brisk walk at the park.
11.Water is also good for our health as it is important to our intestine.
12.we can find the following piramid food anywhere like at the school canteen.
13.So, we’ll get healthy when the waste things are out from our body.
14.There are also many campaigns organised by the goverment to keep people still healthy.
15.We can’t eat the unbalanced food like chocolates, junk food and ice-creams as they can be dangerous to our health.

1. Our body will be healthy by this activity.

2.All the people want to live in a healthy lifestyle both woman and man.

3.on another hand，we extremely need the enough rest.

4.Mind intelligent is from the active body.

5. We can release tension when we fall sleep.

6. At there, I have been thought about “How To Lead a Healthy Lifestyle”.

7. Secondly, we should do an exercise regularly.

8. Balanced diet is good for our digestive system to make it run smoothly.

9. Thirdly, everyone need enough rest after throughout thier whole day.

10. We should jogging or have a brisk walking at the park.

11. Water is also good for our health as it is important to our intestine.

12. Eating with the following the piramid food that we can find it anywhere like at the school canteen.

13. So, we’ll get healthy when the waste thing out of our body.

14. There are also many campaigns organized by the goverment to ensure that people still healthy.

15. We can’t eat the unbalanced foods like chocolates, junk food, ice-cream and many more as they can make our health in danger.