In the Mid-Autumn Festival night,our school held a party for celebrating the Mid-Autumn Festival on the school hall . All the teachers and students attended.(中秋节晚上,我们学校在礼堂举行一个part庆祝中秋节,全部老师和学生都出席了。)
Firstly, our proncipal told a story which was really funny.(如果你想博老师笑的话, 把funny改成boring). After the princle, our school band showed a wonder music performance for us.But the most interesting part for students was playing the games and to win the small gifts.(首先,校长为我们讲了一个有趣的故事。接着,学校音乐队为我们表演了一场精彩的音乐表演。但是最有趣的部分还是玩游戏赢奖品。)
This party was held sucessfully, every student enjoyed it and gained lots of fun. Some of them even suggested more ideas for the next part such as planing more games and providing food to meet their desires and interests. (这次表演成功举行,每个学生都喜欢它并获得好多开心。一些学生甚至为下次的举行提出建议,例如开设多谢游戏和提供食物, 一次去满足他们的欲望和兴趣。)
这样的文章可在初2轻易拿top band. =。=