求大师来帮我写这个作文啦 这篇作文老师有没讲过应该怎么写 啊

这个~~依旧不太清楚 又看又想的感觉像是救落水者的故事 我就照这个写了昂~~
One day,sunny and warm,i was walking along the bank,admiring the beautiful sceneries.But suddenly,i heard the screams from the river made me very worry.Then i was concious that someone is needing help bloodly.Unfortunately,i couldn't swim.So,I screamed loud to ask for aid.While i was searching help,many people came here.Thinking of tne ideas and carrying them out,we managed to save tjat person from the danger.Not only I felt very happy but also the persan who was saved appreciated a lot.How meaningful this day was.