Last week my parents and I went to the park.We saw many beautiful flowers and trees.The river ran happily when the birds singing on the tree. I felt happy that my mother bought a ice cream for me.At 5.00,we went back home and had a dinner.
好多错的地方,比如,唱歌的小鸟应该是in the tree,还有买一个冰淇淋,应该用an